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Song Release: “Paper Beats Rock”

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I wrote “Paper Beats Rock” after an incident
where I chose to stand up for the little guy.
It was the right decision.

I suppose it’s a song about injustice but also about never giving up.
Even if you lose this time, you can play again and win the next.

Listen to the down & dirty demo version of “Paper Beats Rock” on your favorite streaming platform.

Click below to listen on Spotify:

Song: “Paper Beats Rock”
Artist: Lucas Hargis

They done you dirty, New kid on the block
Scissors beat paper, But paper beats rock
Life gives you hell, You give it right back
No heaven to gain, When the game is rigged like that

They done you dirty, Those unlucky charms
Snap ‘em in half like, Snap, crackle, pop
Life sucks you down, Like coffee from a cup
Like bread from a toaster, Pop on right back up

They done you dirty, Way down on your knees
So thirsty for lovin’, Yes, thank you & please
Life gives you lemons? Well, then make lemonade
Savor that sweet & sour, Moonshine flavor you crave

Rock beats scissors & Scissors beat paper
But you know what? Paper beats rock
Rock beats scissors & Scissors beat paper
New kid on the block, Paper beats rock                     

They done you dirty, New kid on the block
Scissors beat paper, But paper beats rock

For your listening enjoyment, also available on YouTube.

Beta Comments: FREEBORN

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Holy FREEBORN, Batman!

Apologies for neglecting the blog posting over the last couple days. I have been churning out a chapter a day on FREEBORN. So far, I have been receiving amazing feedback from my betas. There have been a few minor issues I have corrected, but no major flaws.

Tonight, I received this as portion of some feedback from Tamara Hickman  http://tamarahickman.wordpress.com/ based on the first seven chapters. Of course, I took out the few ‘suggestions’ and just left in the positives for public consumption. 🙂

HOLY CRAP, MAN! Where is the rest? I need it!

I was sucked in, and couldn’t stop reading. There are large sections with no notes, and those are probably the places where I was completely enthralled by the story. If something jarred me out of the story, I noted it.

All of my preconceptions about this story are gone. I didn’t think that I could enjoy the story as much as I did. I love the characters, and their interactions with each other are fluid. The dialogue is sharp, and I can see distinct personalities in almost all of your characters. The introduction of the infected candystriper is genius, and I can’t wait to see how it plays out.

Your story is extremely dynamic, and there is never a moment where the friction/action/conflict stops. There is always something going on, driving the story, and I could tell that right away when it forced me to stay up until 1:04am, reading to the very last word. And then I wanted to cry when there was no more. =)

Holy Handgrenades, Bat Man! Hurry up and finish this book so I can get my claws on it!

Review: FREEBORN

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By chance, I happened upon an opportunity to share the first three chapters of FREEBORN with a stranger–Alexandra Davidoff. We ‘met’ in an online forum where I was seeking feedback on the Pitch. Things progressed from there, and I emailed her a draft. Today, I received this comment in my inbox.
 
Freeborn is an intriguing piece. I like your style of writing, there’s almost an element of poetry in with the descriptive parts that makes it easy for the reader to understand the thoughts and emotions of your MC. I’ve never read anything that’s similar, and that’s a good thing. You’re very unique. I loved the concept, it wouldn’t appeal to everyone but it’s originality made it addictive. I think the chain of events in the first chapter make for an addictive opening, and the interaction between the two characters, Adam and Katia is fantastic. I felt for Katia. Her sadness, her rage, her self doubt came alive with your narration. I loved how the infected bellies were vividly described. The scenes were definitely easy to see in my mind, and the characters were memorable. The dialogue was well balanced with the narration, not overpowering it; I personally like description over dialogue, but your style holds a great balance between the two and I think that would appeal to your readers very well. The plot is adventurous, filled with adrenaline. Things move fast but aren’t confusing. It was an easy story to read, and I found myself smiling back on certain scenes as I moved forward. You have a great sci-fi adventure tale in your hands.”
 
That kind of feeback is good to hear. It echoes comments from two other beta readers that have read through the first seven chapters. I am definitely encouraged to continue writing this story. On to chapter eight!